Lyrics- I wrote them- honest opinion?

WOW! if that was a song, and it was sung nicely i would buy it on itunes or wherever it is sold. the only part is "If i told you how i felt, I think that you'd agree(you should add) just you an me" or something about yourselves that rhymed. you don't have to i'm just helping. But that is really good. gives me a good image of a couple and the beach! :)